It was July 21, 2011 I was hanging out with my friends I was sleeping over my friend Michelle house and we where cleaning out her hot tube so we can go in it then my other friend mica came over to help us.
Then all three of us we saw my dog brother in the back yard an we brought it back 2 the owner. The owner was selling them for free so the owner said she had a a female dog in the back her name was Bella. I was so upset how I saw her. The owner was so lucky I didn't call 911 Bella was so skinny I saw her ribs but her brother was so much worst then Bella if I have not found them they would have died but R.I.P. to her brother that past away 2 days latter after I got her.
By the way Bella is a American pit-bull terrier sweeter then ever.
Once I got Bella home she ate 3 bows of dog food it made me cry seeing her like that. I am a animal lover but Bella was so scared of everyone but me she known that I was not going 2 hurt her or my family was not going 2 hurt her it toke her three days for her to trust the rest of my family in the house she kept me up all night for three days an I would sleep in the day time an then she was getting better an I was so scared that she would die but she came out all right
So me an my dog had fun since she has been here I have videos of my mom an Bella having fun.
On July 21,2012 we had her first birthday wooooooo hooooo I was so happy that we had her for only a year but shes still my little baby she was a puppy when we got her but she looked older but I didnt care what she looked like I known in my hart I saved a dog from dieing an I am proud that I did what I did but I still think about he little brother I wish some times that I ran away with both of them but the owner said that the male was for her cousin but the cousin was right next 2 her I was like omg.
But Bella's brother is in a happier place now. On my phone I have a lot of pictures an videos of my dog when she was happy having fun I know in my hart that she dose miss her brother but I saved an animal for dieing an that's all that matters.
Bella loves me picking her up like a baby an she would follow everyone around the house mostly me. For those 3 days she followed me in the bathroom my bedroom, kitchen any where she could go with me. It was in the summer brake I had when I got Bella an when I had 2 go back to school I was crying that I had 2 leave here an every time I leave my mom told me she would be so sad an mope around sad an when it was time for me 2 be home she would sit at the door an what for me 2 come throw the door. She would jump me an do anything for me to pick her up an hug her I would do it. I would do anything for her.
An when someone had food she would follow but when the food is gone she would find me an if she cant find me she would go crazy. The 2 day when I had her I wanted to take her for a walk an I did and then the new guy on our bloke he let his dogs go free. So me an Bella where walking this big dog came after me an Bella didn't like it an she got in front of me like she would attack the dog an I was scared that she was going to get hurt. So some how I skreamed for my mom she came an helped me get Bella back home an see if she was OK an I was surprised that Bella protected me for that dog.
An then one day my mom an Bella where outside an Bella ran around the back year like she was running in the dog marathon it was so funny I wished I had video taped it. It was so funny that me an my mom was laughing so hard about it. When me or my mom has a water bottle she would sit there until we are done with it or follow us until we give it to her. Then she will get the water bottle an go out back an sometimes she will take a full water bottle an bust it open an she will get scared an run away an then comes back an barks at it an try's to attack it. It was so funny.
Bella's toys she plays with.....
4.her favorite old slipper
Bella looks like a cow lol
shes black and white an has a perfect her head right above her left eye an a prefect circle on her right side of her rib's she is a special dog to me I love her with all my hart I would do anything for her an she would do anything for me.
P.S Paul is there anything other assignments u want me 2 do.
Wow did you put some effort into this assignment. Very impressive. I like how you used descriptive details in describing your puppy. Further, I found the essay more of a story approach, which is difficult to accomplish. I would love to see you take this essay and put it into an outline, if you remember how. From this outline, I can show you how to improve the flow of the story.